bleh, her eyes are huge. I don't know if they should be. It's completely out of proportion.

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~zuz

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
-Perks of Being a Wallflower

alright.
you asked for criticism, so...

shoulders are too narrow.
lips unrealistically shaped.
eyes too big.
idk about hair- Ive never done it.
more contrast would be good. like darker shading.
chin a little more defined.
the neck is too skinny beside the face, it should be the same width and not open, but be almost straight down into the shoulders.

I really like the shading on the neck though. good job there.


just like, you know how when you're younger and someone says draw a tree- you draw like a stick with a cloud on top? well thats human view. and thats what you have to get past to draw/paint more accurately. like, when you draw a face, its hard not to just draw a face like you think it should look, but instead you have to draw whats there. the lines and contours exactly as they are even if it looks wrong in the process, it will end up more realistic. try that.

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if only closed minds came with closed mouths

sorry-
and proportions,
like, make sure everyting is the right size. like. Ill tell you some tricks monday if you remind me

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if only closed minds came with closed mouths

Thank you so much. Now that you've pointed those things out, I can see that they're messed up. Before I just saw that it looked weird. I meant to emphasize the eyes because of her expression, but I overdid it.

I"ll try to remember to ask you on Monday. Thank you so much.

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~zuz

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
-Perks of Being a Wallflower

omg, not the tree again. XD

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So it goes.

"That's what writers do. We cut ourselves open and we bleed all over the page."

is this the thing you showed me in stat last year?

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So it goes.

"That's what writers do. We cut ourselves open and we bleed all over the page."

yes it is. I found it on top of my bookshelf. I"d forgotten about it.

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~zuz

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
-Perks of Being a Wallflower

lolcanoe.
yes, yes it is.

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if only closed minds came with closed mouths

I like the collage type of thing. And I like that you took the photo of them on a peg board. It makes it look like the photo is part of the piece as well as the painting.

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I have completed my Portfolio.